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Feelings

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Formerly, I felt my heart in my shirt.
Serene, I felt  my soul fall in love.

Erstwhile, I listened to soft freshness of the water.
Virtuous, I listened to your ten fingers on my skin.

Dreamer, I tasted so many surprises.
Sometimes, I enjoyed my conquered liberation.

Intense, I smelled  influence of the revival.
Alien, I smelled jaws of the vice.

Lost, I touched delicious limit.
Extreme, I saw years becoming anthracite.

Coolly, I saw shadows of the grave.
Disoriented, I touched finally exit of the creed.
... My idea was to play with 5 senses...

Do you feel 5 senses are well done?
Is it too simple to explain an anchored love?
And what would change you for a little more feelings?
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Iplywittrees's avatar
Fantastic. I like it. ^_^